Black Poetry : When we met

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, May 14, 2019.

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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My commitment could not yet be seen

    Me being honestly a shoot & steal fein

    It's like oh shoot

    How I'm gonna take this in my being shot

    Exploring & giving in for what I sought

    Dynamics being my motives subjugated

    Then you & I become one never to congregate

    Again exspecting a little more
     
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    Sis,

    Sometimes I don't know what to think about what you write but I always hear you, feel you and (smile)
     
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