Black Poetry : When We Make Love...from "The Penis Papers"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 29, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excitingly hard
    Lovingly strong
    Nastily wet
    The aching inside
    Even better yet
    Talk a little dirty
    So much fun to lose control
    The atmosphere is raw
    As we begin to roll

    The softness of the moonlight
    Enough for me to see
    The pleasure in your face
    As you explode all over me
    With each scream of my name
    The tighter you squeeze
    Taking me deeper
    Where you need to be pleased

    The heated thunder inside me
    Begins a slow and steady rise
    Thrusting power surging
    From my *** and from my thighs
    Hear our screams
    Hear our sighs
    Feel the subtle change in rhythm
    See us ******* in my eyes

    Uncontrolled is my manhood
    You so gratefully posess
    Helpless am I to stop the rush
    Finding its way
    To that spot deep within you
    I am drained of my sense
    But there's more we must do

    We must honor and cherish
    This moment of moments
    You loving me
    Me loving you
    For there is nothing more intimate
    Nothing more pure
    A man and woman can ever do

    BE
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE....

    1 word...

    DAYUMMM!!

    :)
    SunShyne~
     
  3. SugaTray

    SugaTray Member MEMBER

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    HeartBeat

    This made me want to light up a cigarette and I don't even smoke. Turn the heat down just a notch. WHEW!!!
     
  4. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in total agreement

    with all of the above! This is some **** heah!!!

    r
     
  5. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shyttttt!!!!!

    show nuff hot in here
    heartbeat ya making me wet!
    wow!!
     
  6. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah....

    you most def showin a whole nutha side....I'm diggin it!

    CELA
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok!!

    Diggin' yo style - while at the same
    time lovin' this piece of YOU!!
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A roll!

    Stay on it--this is too tight--I loved it--I'm heading down to the showers--seeing if I can find a cold one--it's aoong time before work is done--Amun-Ra


    Writers! Learn how to use letters to tell a story. Come over and read an example--Amun-Ra

    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php3?threadid=1504
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STROKING...

    ...whew.

    do what you do, BE.
     
  10. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I couldn't agree more...

    Keep scribing!! CAUSE I'M READING!!!
     
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