Black Poetry : When u get HOME !!!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tonight my love
    when u get home
    a bubble bath
    dinner too
    whisper wordz
    of how i love u

    lights down low
    candles a glow
    soft Jazz music flow

    as i rub ya feet
    i know u tired
    caress ya back
    up and down ya spine
    dinner ready wit table wine
    a single red rose i pose
    coz tonight when u
    get home
    relax soon it's on !:love:

    how was ur day
    that's good babe
    i didn't do it just today
    but this happen everyday
    see my love is sweet
    if u ready to be ?
    coz i'm ready to make it a we
    ur my heart & joy
    my galop of gaze stars
    the sparkle in my eye
    tonight it's about U & I
    together we fly the flyte
    of love this was a touch
    from above

    Tonight i wanna slow dance
    relax u into a gentle romance
    a perfect moment
    of enterwined
    my beloved heart is yours
    my heart beats fast
    when u speak
    u make my knees weak
    i feel like a candy sucker
    been licked
    I love u and been for some time
    but tonight
    the mood is right
    down on my knees
    i ask of thee
    trust and be wit me
    ware my ring of token in pride
    hold me close deep inside
    ur my lady my Queen of nubian
    now let watch the moon
    go down and the sun rise
    tonight the nite

    now what we bout to do will get hot
    pt. ll will tell a lot !:D
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww she's so lucky RICH this is truly another one of your many creations of luv waiting impatiently on part II :)
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich, :wave:

    This is beautifully erotic!! I can't wait for part 2!! :lol:

    :thanks: for this one!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yesssssssssss! ladies thank u
    it shows what can be wit da love of me
    pt.ll will have u moving in your seat......
    the midnight mood
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :::::softly plays moments in love::: Man Rich!!!! That girl is really lucky to have someone like you that can write like this :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is soooooooo beautiful!:)

    i can't wait for part 2...
     
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    swtT.............i truely thank u sistah i've worked hard to be
    what i am and who i be .......


    LovelyG.........i thanketh thee openly pt.ll will be a treat
     
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    love make u do thangz right....
     
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    tonite your miine completely
    you give your love soooo sweeetly...........this was love bru!:love:
     
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    yes sistah MORE.....thank u
    the way men should be to his Queen
    not calling her names & things
    so i bring the vibe to scribe so eyez can see
     
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