Quiet Poetry Lounge : When Trouble comes

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When trouble come
    it don't last always
    it pave way to a
    brighter day
    it strike in da mind
    bring pain at times
    it stops even a shine
    trouble comes in
    different forms
    many ways
    but life without it
    is a crazy maze
    as people we learn
    trouble is a task
    it don't last forever
    soon to pass
    it leave a scared
    heart at times
    but we mend
    together again
    we work to defeat
    many use prayer
    some hold faith
    some just kick it
    in da face
    it's an art of war
    trouble is something
    u don't need to seek
    it fines u if ya weak
    then it a trouble
    for da strong
    to bring u down
    have u thinking wrong
    it's what we hold in
    grasp but how long
    do this last
    it's clear to u
    that u are da fate
    of trouble ya being
    make
    some bring it on
    at work, at play
    even at home
    it come day in
    and day out
    part of what life
    is about so are u
    ready? can u withstand
    the myth of a troubled
    hand
    given the knowledge
    wisdom and grace
    to see trouble
    in a face or place
    not blind nor define
    but trouble comes
    everytime
    it's a struggle
    a moment, a blink
    trouble comes
    differently & unique
    is it truth or a tale
    is it a myth or real
    the answer is deep
    within and what ya
    mental feel
    trouble need no friendz
    it has many kins
    who stand beside him
    like
    problems
    set backs
    lies too
    a brutha
    name kill
    lost of feel
    little to know
    we hold the key
    we learn to speak
    talk about it
    find the answer
    to defeat
    u see trouble
    just keep followin
    me !
    out of greed
    or my creed
    my heart continue
    to bleed
    to defeat the man
    call trouble
    but i need help
    can u hear me now !!!
    :help: :help: :help: :help: :help:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know, this made me thing of a saying that goes something like this: never trouble trouble til trouble troubles you. I always took that to mean don't look for trouble, it'll show up on its own. I can hear you. Maybe together we can help each other. Thought provoking write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very good concept watz......I like dat saying
    Thank u very much .
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    heres my hand
    heres my heart
    take what you need
    any part
    if for a moment it helps you breathe
    move past all the troubled deeds
    ..i be so glad

    and if my hand or heart won't do
    i'll throw my daddys words at you..
    "the best thing i can be givn
    is to just keep on livin"


    intense little piece $rich$...a part of your continuum......yoou know you got a we in me...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    handz & heart will do
    to help me see it through
    but daddy words ring a note
    from the wise with life hope
    Thank u so much Deepy......
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight drop
    and ummmm at some point
    light do over come the dark
    just how you get there
    maybe i need :help:
     
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    follow me angel follow me
    to the light i so will guide u
    pass trouble ....
     
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    When in the dark..."I'll be the light bulb" ...you can turn on,
    and I'll be you're leaning pole...anytime someone do you wrong.
    I'll be your "night" when you're worn and wary from, lack of sleep.
    I'll provide for you...a midnight snack, when you need a bite to eat.
    But most of all, I'll be your "troubles" ...when trouble rear it's head,
    cause I'm a friend till the very end...believe every word I said.
     
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    that was very comforting thank u sistah fo real !
     
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    Im hearing you my brother keep doing the dam thing! :coffee:
     
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