Black Poetry : When Tomorrow Comes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Euphoria, May 26, 2002.

  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want, what I cannot have,
    I need, what I have already,
    But he is not here,
    So I will take you,
    Your touch so warm and tender,
    Your kiss so soft and smooth,
    My desire burning,
    Your pulse racing,
    Hold me
    Touch me
    Fill me
    My need being satisfied,
    My conscious uncaring,
    It will tomorrow,
    When I think of what it is,
    I already have


    7/1/01
    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh!! what u have is all good to what u may want
    forth I am who i am and what u me too be .....nice flow !
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Rich, we are all only human. Thanks for reading.

    Sherykah I'm glad you like it. I know we all go there at some point.

    *Emma*
     
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    lust and loneliness can sometimes make an unforgettable combination..in the heat of the moment..

    K
     
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    well like dady always said if you cannot be with the one you love, love the one you with.
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So very true K, thanks for reading.

    Well Shaz that's an interesting theory tho not always possible. Besides does it have to involve love?

    *Emma*
     
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    I like this flow.......you got any more like this one?
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No sorry Watcher, this was a one off. But hey I'll see what I can write...
    Thanks for reading.
    *Emma*
     
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    true expression in the form

    lovin' it :)

    pd
     
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    emma.


    ...how come you got me ova here hummin'
    "temporary love thang"? :) i love the simple
    yet honest flow of this piece. keep it up, missy! :D

    :heart: itsallLove, chile!!

    elayne.
     
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