Quiet Poetry Lounge : When The Spirit Breaks Free

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PurpleMoons, Nov 19, 2003.

  1. PurpleMoons

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    What is this?
    What is this burning, Bubbling intrusion
    feels like acid in my solor plexus
    As I lay on the floor curled up sideways in the fetal position
    I dare not extend my leggs for fear of a mass explosion
    my heart rate perpetuates pass the reading on the rhicter
    What.......Is.....This!

    What is this?
    As I close my eyes to the madness
    I awaken in complete darkness
    except for the twinkle of those Stars
    Visions starts to form into vivid pictures of clouds
    Charging in and then retreating
    charging in and then retreating
    manipulating my sight
    placing me in the middle of this manifestation
    What.....Is.....This!

    I hold on with all my strength
    trying to prevent it from escaping
    restling through the night
    bareing down holding on to my feet
    As it proceeds to be released
    A gushing sound of wind is heard
    clear across the room
    my body drenched in sweat
    as a sweet mellowed voice
    exclaims softly
    I......................Am......................Free

    I have given thou sight to thee
    Where there was two eyes
    Now you have three
    You gave a good fight
    But what you failed to preceive
    Is although the body may be bound
    The spirit must be freeeeeeeeeeeee!
     
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    whoa, this is really really deep and so well-written. vibin on it, oh yeah.
     
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    i love this...
    it was deep
    and the flow held me
    mch love on dis:angel1:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wheeee..
    i like the flow
    felt "the bubbles inside
    bursting..
    twas lovely
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words made us feel the vibration of that spirit, this was so well written.
     
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    thank you for the touch

    I loved it. It touched a part of me deep within the bowels of my essence. THere are very few pieces that touch me within the depths of my fragile yet resistent being. Thank you for tickling my fancy this moanin' And I like it (sung to the tune of shes strange by cameo.) tUFFY :thanks:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i love this bringin it back
    for a second run.....:lol:
    peace
    Angel
     
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    LOL! Angel you are
    definately a dungeon seeker!

    As I read this one again I had
    to laugh because one can
    intepret it's contents as
    having gas! Hahaha!

    Thank you Sis for
    bringing this one back!

    It has filled my day with
    laughter and praise!
     
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    Purplemoons, you are so silly :lol: ...gas will force you to bald up...but it surely won't put yon in the dark. really...this was alright, very tight piece and spiritual. Once reciving the "third eye" ...you're master of all. I loved and can feel this piece.
     
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    LOL! I don't know sis! some say with a serious case of gas, one has often wished for death. Oh boy! Here I go again! LOL! :laugh: :cry: I hope this piece don't have this effect on me everytime I open it!

    Thank you much Sister QueenTs! Hehehehehe.......:cry:
     
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