Black Poetry : When The Soul Spoke Man Stood Still

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  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The darkness that hide behind my walls
    Consignment of Death
    Closed in walls
    Harvesting the darkness of self
    The windows are foggy
    I cannot see the light
    The sparrows are closing in,
    I am in a box, find my soul
    What goes on in my space?

    Justifying the wrongs for the rights
    Toxins that filled my blood
    Sipping on death
    Oppressor of self
    Surrounding hate
    Pollutions has no fate


    Humiliation by my on right hand,
    Illusion of an empty space,
    Self-destruction dysfunctional disgrace
    Flowing through the Universe
    Who am I? A man without a soul
    The zombies within, crossing the bars,
    Confessions of a soul show me the light
    Message the mind, how do I find the soul
    Who was created in love, releasing the acts of hate
    Life death, Death life, flowing through the universe
    Revitalizing the lost without a soul.



    The darkness that hides within my walls.
    Releasing the toxins, which travels to my mind .
    Flowing through the universe.




    Copywriter 2002 Jacqueline Amos
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another beautiful write...
     
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    lovin it :heart:
    much love,
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so hard and sweet all at the same time.
    Loving it.
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your comments.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my my my where do u come up wit all this inspirational writing :)
     
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