Black Poetry : When The Rain Falls

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  1. Alana

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    as raindrops fall
    and lightening begins
    to strike the sky
    i want u to
    think of me each time
    it's representin' u and i

    weeping through the seals
    of a window pane
    my face is soak and wet
    crying tears of resentment
    fogging it with sweat

    that night i'll never forget
    the love that we shared
    somehow the clouds above
    are dark and gray
    leaving me impaired

    as i reminisce
    and think back of the times
    that we shared
    and this only happens
    when the rain falls
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanna go outside...in the rain

    let the soothing pelting of cool raindrops melting red hot angry soul filled with the memory of those yesterday happenings that brought me to my knees...baby, please. i wanna blame you but i can't find the reasons...justification for pointing fingers of blame during this season of wind and rain...then the lightning came and i ran inside to four walls, a bed, and a million whys...but none could soothe this aching soul...relieve these memories of days of old.

    so

    i wanna go out side
    so i can cry

    peacefully.
     
  3. Alana

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    Thank You For Posting A Reply Baller

    this is my first post
    on Destee's forum

    many of u know me
    better as poeticdelight
    but i recently decided
    that it's o.k to identify
    my first name
    since we are all family
    now

    thanks for the reply

    -Alana
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i love the rain
    thanks for sharing yours
    beautiful soft and refreshing rain

    nice peace

    PooooooooooooeticDelight ~ haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay ~

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave:
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and I too, adore the rain...a wonderful time to reflect and meditate...and hold our loved ones close, if only in our thoughts...

    thank you for this, poetess! :)

    A
     
  6. KRYizar

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    alana, alana, alana
     
  7. Alana

    Alana Banned

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    Hey Destee

    i love the little figure waving at me

    it's so cute :)
     
  8. Alana

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    Hey Alyce

    haven't seen u in a while

    i love reading your
    love poems how about
    submitting one for the
    entire forum for V-Day

    Peace PoeticD
     
  9. Alana

    Alana Banned

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    Hey Sherykah

    i love your new poem

    have u been inside the
    cyber forum for poetry
    (the forum with a fee) LOL

    if u have, let me know

    peace PoeticD
     
  10. Alana

    Alana Banned

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    KRRRRRRY!

    u can put those teeth back
    in your mouth

    and stop calling me by my
    1st name like u know me (LOL)

    ~yes, i read ur new V-Day poem
    very nice and very much unlike
    u on a regular day

    *thinking 2 myself may be KRY has a heart afterall*






    NAHHHHHHH!(LMAO)
     
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