Black Poetry : WHEN THE CITY SPEAK

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  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEN THE CITY SPEAKS
    YOU CAN FIND MY LANGUAGE
    DEEP WITIN THESE TATTERD WALLS
    I
    SHARE ITS DESPAIR
    I
    CAN SEE MY BROTHAS
    DEEP IN THE CITY
    WORKING FOR WHATS NOT THEIRS
    DAUGHTERS HUMP WORRY FREE
    WHEN THE CITY SPEAKS
    IT PACIFIES MY DREAMS
    AND PUTS ME UNDER A SILENT SLEEP
    THE CITY IS INFACT THE STREETS
    TRAPPED DEEP WITIN
    ITS BEEF ITS UNDESIRABLE HEAT
    YOUNG MEN SLANG DOPE
    WORRY FREE
    AND FATHERS CONDONE THIS
    ALL IN THE NAME OF OUT FITS
    THEY GIVE UP THEIR GOD GIVEN TOOLS
    :grouphug: BABIES IF LEFT UNTAUGHT SOON BECOME FOOLS
    WHEN THE CITY SPEAKS
    ITS DEEPER THAN SCHOOL
    WHEN THE QUESTION OF LIFE IS ABUSED
    WHAT THE **** ARE WE GOING TO DO
    IF WE REFUSE TO MOVE
    AND LET THE CITY SPEAK
    VAGUE AS IT SEEMS
    THE CITY IS ALWAYS
    WIDE AWAKE
    SWALLOWING MY DREAMS
    WHEN THE CITY SPEAKS
     
  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very deep flow here
    Observant and simply creative
    How many really listen to the speaking city and all that it;s saying
    Loved this flow!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Peace and love
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep tyte drop well felt when da city speaks out !
    flow on
     
  4. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when the city speaks part two

    im lookin forward to a callabo richmuv luv and respectttttttt
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed so it shall be it's an honor .....peace & love unto u
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The city speaks loud and clear, and does this scribe. Keep the flow going.
     
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    your flow speaks
    a vision indeed
    of these street
    nice one here
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin a tyte write from our great mistaliberator ......
     
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