Black Poetry : When that day come....

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  1. Birddgurl2

    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    when that day come
    it will last forever, and
    i will enjoy every second of it
    when that day come
    i will love you even more
    when that day come
    i will hold on to you tight
    when that day come
    we will lock eyes
    when that day come
    it will hurt, but love hurts
    when that day come
    i will have your last name
    when that day come
    i will not regret anything
    when that day come
    i will give the one thing, that nobody has gotten
    from me and give it to you...
    when that day come.....
    when that day come...
    when will that DAY come??...​
    :angel1: :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    coming sonner then one may know
    when it come let it in to shine
    nice scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice write....
    flow on....Angel
     
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    So many rush that day, then they live a nightmare.

    Take your time, broaden your mind, become the U U are meant 2 be, then when that day does come unforced, U will have much more 2 offer your new love/life.

    Nice piece, little sister.
     
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    THAT WAS REALLY GOOD . DONT ASK JUST DEMANDED IT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this need to be heard again
    love this piece
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    very nice..
    I agree ..take your time...ask the questions..become the you..before you do....
    keep flowing
     
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    No way to know when for sure, but I do know you've got to keep living your life to the fullest regardless. Nice flow.