Black Poetry : When Spring Meets Summer

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To every thing there is a season
    And I am left wondering when
    spring meets summer, will
    the beauty of these two seasons begin
    an eclipse in my heart that will last forever.
    Will those rainy days shower me
    with floral rainbows for my eyes only,
    captivated in cascading drops of glee?
    Will the sun, radiant in it's luminous rays
    of golden light glancing
    beam even stronger, pulverizing
    the heavenly spell that I'm under, dancing
    Will cool, feathery breezes
    that kiss my face
    give way to the sultry steamy
    sensuality of a passion's embrace.
    When spring meets summer
    Come, take me under
    into your visionary wonder.
    To every thing there is a season.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside every season is a reason
    what awaits u is for u indeed surely they we clash
    to sweet beauty
     
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    It will indeed last forever...for you are everlasting . wonderful poem...I actually felt the summer sun as I was reading this.
     
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    Very Nice.. nothing like the embrace found in this flow.
     
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    nice drop
    every season have a reason
    indeed
     
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    what a beautiful flow. those are my two favorite seasons too, watz
     
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    Yes, Rich, what awaits me is for me, a reason for the season, thank you for your support.
    Queentswana, I'm glad to know that the sun beckoned you in this, thank you.
    Thank you Hodee, glad you felt that embrace.
    Indeed, mzblkangel, it does, thanks for stopping by.
    Spring and Summer, what a combination, thanks gempis for your kind words.
     
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    all I can say is that....
    it's beautiful...
    and I love the idea
    of an eclipse...of the seasons
    representing an eclipse
    of states of being...

    Wonderful write...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage, you know how to reach in and grab the meaning behind a poet's words. I really appreciate that in you, thank you so much.
     
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