Black Poetry : When Poets Meet

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  1. keithelea

    keithelea New Member MEMBER

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    When Poets Meet


    The clouds part at their roots…
    Colliding the winds, waves
    Crashing the shores.
    We meet…
    A rare combination
    Of circumstances,
    Our situation aggravate
    A drastic storm, perfectly.
    Words swarm our minds
    Like busy bees in search
    Of the sweet nectar of allegorical,
    Similes and metaphoric explanations…
    Pollinating our conscience and subconscious
    Respectfully…
    The obvious perplexities of poetic banter
    And inconspicuous meaning
    That bounds us…
    Words that conjure from elevated places,
    And rollercoaster into the subliminal…
    Twirling around into loops, pen to paper
    Screeches and screams to an abrupt stop.

    The unexplainable written,
    Describing what was unknown…
    Scrambling to unscramble words
    To define this acquaintance,
    And when the stars play chase
    Through the night sky
    And the moon is set-
    Know that somewhere out there
    Two poets have met…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Welcome to destee.com poetic playground of peace and respect
    welcome to the family poeticly as we share the depth of our poetry
    Happy to have you aboard Keithelea.


    O'yes as a poet i truely believe that.......awesome post of truth
    look to read more of you soon .
     
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    keithelea New Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much, I am humbled by you response...
     
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    This was so dramatic I love it. Without a doubt I felt the roller coaster ride of words laying to rest from the wind, of all that has stir up from the pen of a poet. Very nice
     
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    The elements get tossed and turned over when poets meet. Beautiful work, poet!
     
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    well poet...

    your entrance was flawless. your introduction flowed like a never-ending stream, constantly whispering its intent, while singing its pleasure.

    i be baller. nice ta meet ya.
     
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