Black Poetry : when one's at wit's end...

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nearly...
    at the edge of everything
    i almost knew

    possibly
    my head hangs like
    it felt gravity hard...

    pulling toward floor
    pulling all for
    the grey hairs
    and receeding hairline
    that follows the heartbreak
    and anguish
    that
    followed you out of the door

    sean has no problem settling
    for your
    past's presence--
    infact
    let your presence pass
    grace me with you
    and
    take one away from

    when one's at wit's end...

    take one away from
    the grey hairs
    and receeding hairline and
    the thought of losing you

    take one away from it all with your
    *air*

    espee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    work dem keyz please

    **** tyght bru! pull me right in .........flow on!
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read RICH

    your replies and constructive criticism never go unappreciated.

    sean
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    Sean

    How did I miss this dog... Im feelin you hea!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reas...

    thanx for the read cuzzo.

    alwaysAppreciative

    espee
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