Black Poetry : When night falls...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by strmgam, Feb 17, 2005.

  1. strmgam

    strmgam Member MEMBER

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    And there's just me
    Wandering hands challenge our last encounter.
    Something about steamy waters and total recalls.
    Excerpts from yesterdays passage into my favorite pastime,
    So my hands mimic yours ...

    And my everything falls into a trance.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fantasize for me again.
     
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    strmgam Member MEMBER

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    1Poet'
    You feel'n that.
    Sweet.
     
  4. certainty

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    a lovely poem

    <:

    pastime has only one t

    this is an outstanding lovely poem.
    I am glad I didn't miss seeing it here.
    the voice is consistent and the images
    flow into each other softly and they glitter.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow ..deep and to the point ...lol
    I like the fact that it's being kept real, I like that
    welcome to our little corner of the world. tight write poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmmm!
    this took me there and back
    how i love moments like this !
    tyte sweet short drop
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a great flow deep mental passage of a thought...Angel
     
  8. strmgam

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    Good look'n out. lol.
    pastime.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those thoughts flowed deeper than a chasm. Thanks for taking us there.
     
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    tight drop, poet
     
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