Black Poetry : When Morning Comes Early

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night he laid down
    surely thinking the sweetest
    thoughts of love all aglow

    His sensual caresses in
    the darkness of the night
    shrouded her in the
    smoothest of comforts

    She felt protected against
    the coming of the morning

    The contour of he, the man,
    and the silhouette of she,
    the woman, reigned supreme
    during the hours of darkness

    With eyes closed, they tasted
    the breath of the evening's
    aphrodisiacal dew

    They embraced tightly and
    lovingly; hoping never
    to happen upon the coming
    of the early morning

    Wrapped in passion unlimited
    He loved her as he always had
    Blanketed by the darkness
    but exposed at morning's light

    Time stood still not; hours
    rushed hurriedly by as if
    mocking them into hastening
    their soulful and passionate union

    Then, racing across the sky, came
    the outstretched hands of the
    morning's dawn stroking their
    moisture soaked skin from the
    past night's ecstasy

    It had come early as it always did
    Tormenting their souls and
    forebodingly teasing their sensually
    exhausted mentals with its glow

    And as silently as she appeared,
    she vanished like a quiet breeze
    with the thought of him calling
    her name with silent eyes

    She would anxiously await her
    lover to dream tonight's
    dream of her

    Until the next morning comes
    early again…
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the exquisite reality...

    of dreams manifested in the wee hours of a wonderful morning.

    aaah.

    can't wait 'til tonight.

    hmmm.

    flow dat.
     
  3. Afridancr

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    GQ

    this was delightful!!

    think I'll go to bed early tonight!;)
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ.....

    your flow is ALWAYS worthy...

    & tyght...
    & romantic...
    & sensual...
    &... well... you get the pic!

    Peace...
    SunShyne~
     
  5. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about Rapid Eye Movement !

    Cause I'm not only feelin this, I'm seeing it!
    Tyght Piece! Jyntl
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    The scene you painted...priceless, bending words 'til they say "Uncle" huh? well done poet, my brother.

    one love,blak
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    Tight Flow

    you broke it down this time

    i give u a spinning star :spinstar:
     
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