Black Poetry : When Lust Disguise

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  1. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When lust disguise
    There are plenty of lies
    To be told

    Making it almost unbearable
    When the truth unfolds

    What you thought was love
    Made it easy
    For you to give a piece
    Of your “Priceless Femininity/Masculinity”

    Then when a strong wind came thru
    You wasn’t able to stand
    Your foundation was built on lust
    Which cannot hold you thru storms, but love can

    --So You Blew In The Wind--

    What you thought was trust made it
    Easy for you to let him/her hit it “Raw”
    Then later on you see you wasn’t the only one
    Getting’ in on that “fun”
    And your frozen truth unthaws

    Brothas and Sistas,
    Lust is a sin and it ain’t yo’ friend

    That’s what we got to realize
    And stop being so gullible in matters of intimacy
    Stop believing “everything” we hear and see
    Because it could very well be
    A trick
    Just to get
    What’s between yo thighs
    That’s what we got to realize
    Keep yo eyes on the prize
    Stay on the lookout when lust disguise
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SISTA KIMDRICKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave:
    I knew this board was missin SOMETHIN :)
    WELCOME BACK HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    and WHOA what a way to come home :)
     
  3. Niyha

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    oh yeah...

    " some guys/girls are only about... that thing that thing..." i felt this...
    peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    enjoyed this read
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, sometimes we do hear what we want to hear, and see what we want to see. I liked this eye opening scribe.
     
  6. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luv everybody!!! :thanks:
    heeeeey triniti!!!!! :wave: it's good to be back!
     
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    Hi:wave:
    wow
    what a mind opening poem
    nice flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    kimmy Kimmy :sand: i ,m with ya sis

    and thanks for dropping this..


    :teach:




    Lovelibertylady
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whooooooooaa, this was straight up tyte to death.....I was feelin' this....the message was heard x 1000.
     
  10. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow and message
    Now if you could just blast this around the world
    Maybe the STD rate would plummet
    Again nice Flow!!!


    Peace and love
     
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