Black Poetry : WHEN LOVE KNOCKZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U can't hide
    da emotions
    when love knockz

    u can't run
    in motions
    when love knocks

    my love is a sweeper
    a great heart keeper
    the warm affection
    to hold u in perfection
    of a bliss
    of sweet gentleness
    when it knockz
    let it in
    u can't withstand da bliss
    of the magical kiss
    and the caress of essence
    ya heart lone to mix
    u can't run form dis

    when love knockz
    open da door
    once inside
    my love will explore
    to a wave of rapture
    this sweetness u
    will capture
    when love come
    u will sing from
    the compassion
    my warmth bring

    when love knockz
    it come raw
    wit a face to claim
    work ya body
    to a sweat
    dis da love u can bet
    to mesmerize u
    hypnotize ya
    relax ya to a wet
    from the above lover
    when i come correct
    so when it knockz
    open ya soul
    inside i roam da
    heart u compose
    and in ya mental
    i play in the raptured way
    so u can't run nor hide
    dis love is like air
    i can reach u anywhere
    close ya windows tyte
    my love now in flyte
    close ya doors good
    but watch the key hole
    or under the base
    before morning dis
    love u face
    it trace wit max speed
    weave in curve
    make bodies yearn

    dis a love hot ready to burn !
    WHEN LOVE KNOCKZ .........

    floating bliss of love in da air
    all copy rights (c) Reserved
    2003 $R:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my...i love this...
    cani just give you
    the key?????
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot:

    not much else to say about that right thurr......
     
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    wooooooweeeeeeeee!!!

    the key is mine
    anyway
    is bliss of air
    get in anyway
    but i'll come
    in da night
    from my loves great flyte
    and hold u rite
    caress u tyte
    be the light so hand da key !

    gempis ......in a zone ya know
    da rapture is in motion thankz
     
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    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the way the flowed, think this would be a dope spoken word in my book...

    one luv
     
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    yes it's da love in ya ear
    hear it good
    know it's there
    soon the rapture u will
    come
    so sleep lite
    one eye open
    if u close them u will be taken
    in the love greatest maze
    yes that's what u hear !!!!
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Mind~$ouL
    hit me up, big thankz for feeling dis flow of knockz
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the key is yours…
    stop all this talk…
    and come on home…
    da night is all in
    flyte…ya know what I like…
    so stop all this talkin
    and come on home ta nite...
    stop actin brand new...
    lets do the do....an
    play like grown folkz do...:heart:
     
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    u done did it again my brutha, came with another masterpiece.
     
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    blkangel................
    when love knockz
    open da door
    see da love ya heart
    beckon for
    yet i have da key
    to da lock
    get ready to be rocked
    in the waves of love
    and know been blazed
    in amazing heat of
    compassion
    so dress in red
    be in bed
    headed in
    da love knockz
    deep within

    poeticlyspeakin.................Thankz trying to bring da flava of rapture into hearts ......ya words mean a lot to me .
     
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    I agree wit Mind~$oul...
    this would be one of them spoken-word flows where all the sistas start off like :eeek: and end up all :blush: LoL
    lovein the lovely lyrics of love my brotha :)
     
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