Black Poetry : when love comes...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when real love overtakes you
    passion can consume you
    melt you and reduce you
    to a heap of quivering flesh
    in the face of your own desires
    something about love hard wired
    into the mental
    seems nothings accidental when
    love comes
    and it seems some are fated
    to stand in the path
    of it's oncoming
    like a sweltering heat
    pummeling emotions
    into focus
    awaiting the enescapable
    first touch
    loves touch
    and it can seem too much
    for the mind to bare
    overwhelms the soul
    and affections shared
    from one to another
    seem enough to
    banish reason
    or reason not borne of
    this inescapable love
    and it seems nothing else
    could ever be enough
    not when real love overtakes you

    (c)06/03/Michael
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love, blinds you of all reasoning...this piece was touching and emotional...felt this one beyond the words. Stirring read!
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah it can. I look foward to somn' like that.
    Thanx Angelicsage
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece I can relate to. Love surely can blind us. Just as long as it doesn't have us deaf and dumb too! Great write! Keep it up! One day you'll find your other half!
     
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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    God... u just dont understand how much i love to read ur poems. ur flow is so natural and so right. good job poet!!
     
  6. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know that's right Alizentang.
    Peaice

    Poetically, I'm lovin' when ya feel me.
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cover eyez sometime we can be blind to facts
    dis was tyte flowin'
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this one...keep doin ur thang...GOD BLESS
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich. I know that's right.
    gotta keep them eyes wide open
    or get caught up in the hype.

    Thanx Badux. appreciate the love.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep..feeling this skrybe7..when love comes...wonderful
     
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