Black Poetry : WHEN LIFE ISN'T ENOUGH

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  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Man u just talked to my spirit and i heard every word
    and i have tryed with all my might to live up to this very thing .

    with the right connection i'll be complete.....Thankz for sharing this
    and re-opening my mental to see what is !
     
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    powerful

    thought wrenching work here poet

    :bowdown:

    it made me think about my life

    wow

    :thanks:
     
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    I do believe, that for most of us at one time or another...catch this feeling.
    Excellent piece poet!!
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Keita,

    That's Real
    Encourage yourself
    For I am the answer

    :teach: :teach: :teach:

     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes I feel like I been cheated of life,
    as I know only "I" ...can make this wrong, right!

    It's never to late, to start anew....
    the places I seen, has surely been few.

    When "love isn't enough, I can fix that too,
    got so much love in store for you.

    Dying should never come into play,
    ours house do leave...but our spirits stay.

    So when ya hide behind that door, don't lock it
    I'm on my way, ...to help you rock it.​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we go through this search, it's a search that seems to go beyond soul searching, looking for that missing piece of the puzzle. Thought provoking piece, well done poet, with a great flow back from queent.
     
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