Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Dec 6, 2008.
Man u just talked to my spirit and i heard every word
and i have tryed with all my might to live up to this very thing .
with the right connection i'll be complete.....Thankz for sharing this
and re-opening my mental to see what is !
thought wrenching work here poet
it made me think about my life
I do believe, that for most of us at one time or another...catch this feeling.
Excellent piece poet!!
In the Spirit of Sankofa!
For I am the answer
Sometimes I feel like I been cheated of life,
as I know only "I" ...can make this wrong, right!
It's never to late, to start anew....
the places I seen, has surely been few.
When "love isn't enough, I can fix that too,
got so much love in store for you.
Dying should never come into play,
ours house do leave...but our spirits stay.
So when ya hide behind that door, don't lock it
I'm on my way, ...to help you rock it.
Sometimes we go through this search, it's a search that seems to go beyond soul searching, looking for that missing piece of the puzzle. Thought provoking piece, well done poet, with a great flow back from queent.
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