Black Poetry : When Libidos Hit

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 2, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It cookie cuts holes in the sky
    and her screams are chased by his
    into the universe racing pacing
    themselves with shooting stars
    cumming back to earth with
    names like Aurora Borealis and
    Alpha Centurion...
    changing names to best describe
    the occurrence of the
    "right place and time" when the
    moons stars and planets were aligned
    when their libidos hit.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLAK~

    I see that you were inspired well
    into the wee hours of the morn' to write!
    Well Done...
    I like the flow of it all!!
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's good to see that you still flow deep like a mountain river after the spring thaw... This was a sexy piece in a suttle way.

    One
     
  4. Cinamon365

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    Submerged!

    Into the "outer" outed limits - that
    are beyond the Ozone layer.....
    Scrump-dilly-umptious!
    This is short/sweet/delicious!!
     
  5. GQ

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    Blak,

    Powerful thing that libido!!! Nice work!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!! This piece is out of this world!!

    bout ready to go there...;)
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri, Ya soooo nasty!!!!!!

    LOL!!!

    How ya been gurl???

    Peace
    GQ
     
  8. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smiling at GQ

    thank you for making me laugh a bit. I needed that! I'm good. Been tryin' to reach you.

    Hey, would you think it was nasty if my energies were directed to you???!!!LOL
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I luv

    errythang about this heah!

    thank you for my smile today! :)

    A
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TO MY PEEPS

    N2, UbZorbSHun, Cinamon 365 (another name for the hall of fame), GQ, Afridancr, and alyce:

    If I were to give thanx to everyone individually by the time I was done we'd have a novel...with that said I say to everybody...Thank you, as always YOUR words are priceless. Afri and GQ...what ya'll talkin' 'bout? LMAO.

    one love, blak