Black Poetry : When its all said n done(a serenti n sarcasm joiint)

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when its all said n done...
    where did i go wrong?
    was it b/c i told u i love u?
    or was it b/c i couldnt stand 2 b around u
    maybe i didnt do nething wrong....
    it was u all along who didnt love me
    but u couldnt tell me that 4 some reason either

    Serenti--

    but when its really said n dayum near done
    i want 2 leave lettin u know i was da one
    da 1 who held ur hand even when u werent paid
    da 1 who neva held her tongue but said wat she had 2 say
    da 1 who wasnt yo woman but yo female friend
    da 1 who let u know wat was wrong n everythang w/in
    da 1 who was scared 2 set u free
    but now since its done, free u shall b
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twice as nice!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha dats da shciznit gurl i am feelin dat rite dere lol now all we need is Royal T and we can be charlies angels ya feel me lol keep flowin cuz i know i will
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lmao.........ight ight :) we gonna keep flowin, promise
     
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    yall better keep flowing...or i'll be highly upset.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin da vibe y'all scribe
    flow on poets
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CHARLIES ANGELS AIN'T GOT NOTHIN' ON US!!!!!!!!!!


    When its all said n done (unfinished piece...lookin 4 ne1 who wants 2 do a collabo)

    Sarcasm4eva: (Somewhere, USA)

    when its all said n done....
    where did i go wrong?
    was it b/c i told u i love u?
    or was it b/c i couldnt stand 2 b around u
    maybe i didnt do nething wrong......
    it was u along who didnt love me
    but u couldnt tell me that 4 some reason either

    Royal T.(chicago..evanston)

    Well, it's not said and it's definitely not done.
    It was not me all along.
    You told me you loved me, but you failed to show it.
    Your words followed by no attention equal bittnerness.
    I try to love you with the best of me,
    But like you said, you couldn't stand to be around me unforturnately.
    If you're willing, we can work it about together,
    If it's not in you I'd like you to set me free forever.

    Serenti-poet (atlanta)

    but when it's really said and dayum near done
    i want to leave lettin you know i was da one
    da one who held yo hand even when you weren't paid
    da one who neva held her tongue but said wat she had to say
    da one who wasn't yo woman but yo female friend
    da one who let you know wat was wrong and everythang within
    da one who was scared to set you free
    but now since it's done free you shall be

    Royal T. (chicago..evanston)

    I see I'm not worth your fight.
    You set me free so **** easily.
    Now that I'm free, I hope you realize.
    That you let go of someone that would die to help you rise.
    I'll miss you holding my hand,
    I'll miss telling lame jokes and you pretending to understand.
    I'll be strong for the both of us,
    I'll hold back my tears so it won't cause my heart to rust.
     
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    wooooooooweeeeeeeeeee!
    three da hard way !
     
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    ayo sarcasm tell me when you wanna do this and let's not forget Royal T lol :)
     
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    HELLO DESTEE'S ANGELS THIS IS AUNTIE CHARLIE! lol

    I'm proud of you ladies, really proud! You showing Destee what you made of and laying down some Masterpiece ****...Now you know I got yo back...where do I send your checks too ?...LOL

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1:
     
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