Black Poetry : When its all said n done( a Royal_T n sarcasm joiint pt.1)

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when its all said n done...
    where did i go wrong?
    was it b/c i told u i loved u?
    or was it b/c i couldnt stand 2 b around u
    maybe i didnt do nething wrong.....
    it was u all along who didnt love me
    but u couldnt tell me that 4 some reason either


    Royal_T

    i see im not worth ur fight.
    u set me free so **** easily.
    now that im free, i hope u realize.
    that u let go of some1 that would die 2 help u rise.
    ill miss holdin ur hand,
    ill miss tellin lame jokes n u pretendin 2 understand.
    ill b strong 4 the both of us,
    ill hold back my tears so it wont cause my heart 2 rust
     
  2. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhh! lol...I've put all three together if you want me to post it....and girl you better start using copy and paste....it's wonderful.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea, please do, lol.......much love......got finals comin up, need my hands for that..........:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flow do ya thing
    bring it on !!!
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When its all said n done (unfinished piece...lookin 4 ne1 who wants 2 do a collabo)

    Sarcasm4eva: (Somewhere, USA)

    when its all said n done....
    where did i go wrong?
    was it b/c i told u i love u?
    or was it b/c i couldnt stand 2 b around u
    maybe i didnt do nething wrong......
    it was u along who didnt love me
    but u couldnt tell me that 4 some reason either

    Royal T.(chicago..evanston)

    Well, it's not said and it's definitely not done.
    It was not me all along.
    You told me you loved me, but you failed to show it.
    Your words followed by no attention equal bitterness.
    I try to love you with the best of me,
    But like you said, you couldn't stand to be around me unfortunately.
    If you're willing, we can work it about together,
    If it's not in you I'd like you to set me free forever.

    Serenti-poet (atlanta)

    but when it's really said and dayum near done
    i want to leave lettin you know i was da one
    da one who held yo hand even when you weren't paid
    da one who neva held her tongue but said wat she had to say
    da one who wasn't yo woman but yo female friend
    da one who let you know wat was wrong and everythang within
    da one who was scared to set you free
    but now since it's done free you shall be

    Royal T. (chicago..evanston)

    I see I'm not worth your fight.
    You set me free so **** easily.
    Now that I'm free, I hope you realize.
    That you let go of someone that would die to help you rise.
    I'll miss you holding my hand,
    I'll miss telling lame jokes and you pretending to understand.
    I'll be strong for the both of us,
    I'll hold back my tears so it won't cause my heart to rust.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yay, my 1st collabo..........btw im from nyc, ny :)
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOUR FIRST COLLABO WAS A HIT...THANKS NYC ;)
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey, I tell ya that was the ****,keep it rollin, cuz i'm feelin...


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    u know da kaz
    gotta put 2 cents n...

    when it's all said and done
    i had to run
    the real-ness of your loves firm
    steel-ness
    was too much to deal with
    its not that i didnt feel this
    like you felt it
    i'm just not ready for true luv
    and i can't help it
    nor can i tell the truth
    cause that would shake my pride loose
    like a loose tooth...

    lovely colab ladies...dis be on point...like a finger joint
    peace
    khasm
     
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