Black Poetry : When It Rains, It Pours

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    gray mist clouds and droplets
    of rainy weather trinkling
    down my window pane brings
    us together

    as i silently lay tuning into
    the words of Lauryn and Sade
    spiritual growth awakening in
    me

    this world seems so far away
    in the coming approach of labor
    day

    i pray these feelings are destined
    to stay brightening the sky
    radiantly on graduation day

    when it rains in the month of May
    it pours this passion inside can't
    be ignored




    apt copyright 2001
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautifully written poem. It poured down here in Ft. Walton
    and me was without my hubby. But I have been in this poem
    before, with the rain and my man...only I was tuning into the words of Bebe Winans.




    *Being spiritually awakened by the Son*
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    life is good.....

    alana,

    i pray for you and your future success..
    on that day in May, remember me, aight...

    thanks for understanding me and you'll always keep a higher place in me..

    *singing my love is king* :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAY SHOWERS

    OF BEAUTY AS THE RAIN DROP LOVE UPON
    YA SOUL AND HOLD BOND IN HE ......I LOVE IT!
    KEEP ONFLOWIN SIS...:heart: :kiss:
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    joyce it always rains on the gulf coast

    i simply love it :)


    Rich as always my pleasure



    J'hiah i understand you all too well
    sometimes it's simply scary LOL :lol:


    pd
     
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