Quiet Poetry Lounge : When I'm Near You...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lowkey, Aug 25, 2004.

  1. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i'm near u



    when i'm near u my masculine frame melts from the aura of yo sexyness
    U give me feelings unexplainable, unparalled, underneath my skin and str8 to my heart is where u delve
    In my arms is where u need be...
    I never thought I'd get the chance to gaze into the eyes of an angel
    Or get captured in a rapture of a smile as heavenly as yours
    When I'm near u I feel....
    Like i'm on top of the world and nothin can stop me
    When i'm near u i feel like u stole my heart like a surgical robbery
    Ur brown smooth skin sends me in a whirlwind
    The warmth of yo hugs, gentelness of ur touch, the way yo jeans fit soo snug...dayum is the only word left in my vocabulary
    When I'm near u I feel elated
    When I'm away from u ur soothing prescense never leaves me
    In my arms is where u need be...
    To be close to u is the only thing I want in the world
    Cause honestly, theres no other guy that could do what i do girl
    When I'm near u my emotions dance, I find myself caught in a trance....when I'm near u
    I love the way u look at me, the blink and bat of ur eyes
    The way u say my name, how those 2 syllables roll off ur tongue u got me spun... dayum is the only word left in my vocabulary
    When I'm near u, I get the fuel to produce such poetic flattery
    I feel like I've been struck by lightning cause when I'm near u... you send electric bolts thru my anatomy
    Being near u is a feeling that I wouldn't trade in fo the world
    Grasp on tight to these words, let them touch u, move u, caress ur mind because deep in my heart u've always been my favorite girl.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee.com
    enjoyed ya scribe thanks for sharing
    hope to read more....

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    welcome within again

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    Welcome to Destee! Diggin your piece here, and lookin forward to seeing more of your flows.
     
  4. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx ya'll


    I'll be droppin more poems soon
     
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    This was so warm, expressive, and endearing, very nice write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome lowkey to destee.com tyte write & flow
    dig ya style flow head as i welcome u to the family

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  7. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx fam.


    I will drop more flows soon


    thanx fo da luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise happy ur here sharing upon us and part of the family
     
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    Welcome Brother lowkey

    There was nothing but love in this piece. Nice drop. Peace and blessings
     
  10. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u my sistah



    love 360
     
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