Black Poetry : when i think of you*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (sorry! i posted this in one of my other poems replies!)

    off the dome.truthfully.wholeheartedly.

    when i think of you--
    i feel joy
    somewhere in the center of
    my one point perspective
    just because...
    the thought of you is artistry

    flesh muscle and intelligence loomed
    together with a personality that--
    overshines the worst circumstance--
    outstands the greatest worldly achievement--

    when
    i
    think
    of
    you
    i feel words flash across my head--
    like a running dictionary--
    phrase that describes you speeding--
    at onehundredandninetymilesper
    smile and touch and sarcastic gesture--
    sean grasping for them and
    catching not-a-one
    because--
    while they sped by...
    him thought of only one that might come close to--
    when him thought of you--
    angelic maybe?
    no.
    unearthly...no.but close.

    when i think of you
    i think of
    Y
    O
    U

    and all that you represents.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sean

    u open da doors to beauty
    wit da essence of love u pose
    man dis be tyght and u bringing
    a vibe in scribe that she would love
    to hear ova & ova .......keep flowin':heart: :D
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany.


    ...whoa!!

    2 words...
    Brilliant-ly beaUtiful.

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    You got some ill mentalz cuz! Diggin this!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thepoetsean

    luvin' this piece Sean.

    Well written (per usual) :D

    Keep crankin' em' out!

    N2
     
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    girls like her make you write pieces like this, trust.

    tyte,
    jh.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya'll for the read

    i can appreciate the fam for all the constructive criticism and replies.

    thanx again...

    sean
    :nuts:
     
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    I've seen you Before.

    Tyte piece Poet!:)
     
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