Black Poetry : WHEN I THINK OF YOU…..

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEN I THINK OF YOU…..
    MY HEART BEATS RAPID AS JUST
    A SIMPLE THOUGHT OF YOU…..
    FIRES BURN…
    DEEP INSIDE….
    NOT GOING OUT…
    TWISTED IN THOUGHTS
    AND SCARED MY SENSES AWAKEN
    AS I LOOK UPON YOU LOOKING
    INTO YOUR EYES NOT
    KNOWING HOW
    STRONG YOUR INFLUENCE IS OVER
    ME I CANT GET ENOUGH OF YOU…
    EACH TIME WE PART
    GETS HARD…..
    WONDERING WHEN WILL
    BE THE NEXT TIME…
    CLOSE IN YOUR ARMS
    WONDERING IF I AM IN YOUR
    MIND AS STRONG AS YOUR IN MINE…..
    IF I GAVE YOU JUST PART OF ME….
    HOW WOULD YOU TREAT IT?
    WOULD YOU LOVE ME MORE….T
    AKE CARE OF IT?
    OR JUST WALK AWAY….
    WANTING TO GIVE YOU LAUGHER
    AND THE LOVE I KNOW I HAVE INSIDE…
    BONDED MY MISTAKES AND
    HELD WITH CHAINS…
    YOUR PART OF MY LIFE
    I SEE AND I WANT TO BE WITH…
    OPENING UP TO SOMETHING
    I WANT IS NOT MY WAY….
    RUNNING IS WHAT I DO BEST….
    EVERYTHING SEEMS RIGHT ABOUT
    YOU AND I AM COMFORTABLE WHEN
    I AM WITH YOU…DON’T FEEL LONELY
    OR LOST SAFE AND HAPPY….
    WHEN I THINK OF YOU….
    I WANT MY
    EVERYTHING TO BE OF
    YOU OF US…..

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2003
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice. Afraid to enter, afraid to leave. Sends you into a spin. Always choose it go all the way. Take that ride inside of love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this allow one to see within deep where emotions live
    very nice scribe poetess....
     
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    Hearin ya loud and clear, girl. Real nice.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys for reading and postin..
     
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    Very nice!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you SwtT