Black Poetry : When I See You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, May 19, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I try to catch your eyes
    As you pass me by

    Everyday
    You look like a miracle
    I wish I could touch the sky

    You seem so perfect and happy
    To me
    When I see you

    I feel like I'm on cloud nine
    I get butterflies
    That stir up my heart

    Sometimes I wander if you'll ever notice me...
    Sometimes I wander if we could be...

    I imagine all the things
    We could do

    I don't even know your name

    Still I imagine
    Our star will shine
    And love to be right by our side

    When I see you
    I wish we were one

    I wish you could be
    My superman

    And save me from
    All the things
    That I hide myself from

    Try to pretend

    I dream that you'll know

    It's just a silly disguise
    That I put on

    To cover
    The insecurities
    Of my life

    Let me have this one fantasy ...

    Everytime I see your face
    Mines lights up
    Eluminating with so much emotion

    And you just walk on by
    Don't even know my name

    I wish I could speak
    But I get so weak

    I get so shy ...
    You make me wanna fly...

    How can I let you know
    What I see is so precious to me?
    I don't know you
    Although I want to hold you in my arms
    And sing a lullaby
    Taking care of you for eternity...

    Just the two us
    Side by side
    Even though I don't know you
    I know you in my dreams
    So sweet

    It's just a dream

    When I see you...

    Desert Storm
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    next time i see him Desert Storm ...
    i'm gonna tell him you want him :)

    lovely peace Sis

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Tay!

    Thanks you sis,
    Love,
    Desert Storm :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i knoweth of he who u seek out
    just holla .....nice flow of he .
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SWEET AND WHISFUL!

    Beautifully written, sounds like your smitten...wonderful girl just wonderful!
    Blessings on ya house!