Black Poetry : When I met You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jan 21, 2007.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This morning I woke you were so vivid in my mind
    I can describe where we were it was a familiar place
    You were working I was just standing around

    All of a sudden I was in your arms
    Immediately I know what I found
    Your pelvis pushed against my groin
    Sent tingles up my spine.
    It went from foot to head I know
    It stopped and put something on my mind.
    Then you disappeared I sat around
    Thinking of what took place
    You showed up again there was no longer a crowed room
    Just me and in a place

    Then you were standing above me in black gartered hose
    I turned to see your waist
    We kissed you sat down
    In a few exchanges we discussed all that was needed to know
    I shared with you what you asked me about
    I have a place you know
    I thought not now let the relationship build

    Then I thought why pass up this chance
    To have the time of my life right now get with her to make the romance.

    This is solid a keeper in a flash I knew
    I had to have you now.
    It was a dream come true
    I am glad I met you
    I shared what needed to be said
    You said you understood
    How great this will be
    You we all into me
    A relationship
    This is good.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds better than good, it sounds like some kind of wonderful. This read so genuine and lovely Hodee. Good to "see" ya again.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i like this My sweet. Welcome back. I miss you please grace us with your beautiful talent.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u droppin made love and warmth that make me wanna go hug
    somebody and lay a fat kiss on them ......love this piece...............