Black Poetry : when i make love to you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Mar 12, 2001.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's seven
    it's heaven
    when i make love to you

    for when i make love to you
    the mountains lower their heights for view
    and
    the sexy glare from your eyes causes even
    the sun and moon to dimmen in the air...
    the eyes of the universe stare
    when i make love to you.

    for when i make love to you
    the art
    the heart of your song inspires
    the choral songs of oceans
    and
    the earth stops spinning
    in awe
    in suspense of your every motion

    it's like seven
    it's like heaven
    when i make love to you...

    j'hiah
    infinite
    from his serene garden of love.
     
  2. Nita

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    When I make love to you
    I feel as free as a dove
    Stars are within reach
    and rivers turn into oceans
    I am soothed
    soothed....soothed

    When I make love to you
    The earth starts to shift
    Dancing on clouds
    Ever so gently I am moved
    moved....moved

    When I make love to you
    Those before me you'll forget
    The smell of love in the air
    As I take you in
    Im fulfilled
    fulfilled....fulfilled
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all I can ever say

    in response to lovingwrite is "yes". Beautiful work, Jh. Beautiful.

    Thank you,

    A
     
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    and i say Yes too ...

    Yessssssss!

    for when i make love to you
    the mountains lower their heights for view


    Sing that Song J'hiah!

    Whew!

    Destee
     
  5. Alana

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    this was tight!

    just wanted to let u know :)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jehiahpoetic...

    3 words...
    ****! simply beautiful...

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    WOWWWW!!!! This one here is DA BOMB!!!!!! Keep blowing it up in here!!!!!
     
  8. Alana

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    Facial Expression

    *oh no*
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' the flow of this piece the second time around, j'hiah. now, you know this is tyght and ofcourse, i had to respond, dear poet. i say, yesss to the love poetry...it's beautiful.
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "serene garden" nx

    nita,
    we're like the Ashford & Simpson,
    Peaches & Herb, Ike(nonviolently) & Tina in this joynt!!!!
    sing da song Anna Mae!! Sing it *with my left boot off*
    lol
    thanx my peeps
    Alana, beauty & brains- we'll kinect

    j'hiah
    resting
    in his garden

    copyrighted, written on a leaf of the serene garden
    nfinite
     
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