Black Poetry : When I Go

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  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    When i go please dont cry or feel bad
    Just remeber the times i made you glad.

    My soul shall rest in peace
    Past the ocean's and all the sea's.

    Sorry i didnt get to tell you goodbye
    But i was short of breath and it was time to die.

    I know you may never understand
    Just remeber this was apart of God's plan.

    I know you feel it wasnt my time
    But that's just a thought in the back of your mind.

    I know you may want to quit and give up
    Just remeber me and thank God and you will be able to make it through anything that's rough.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice peice
     
  3. elayne.

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    blacklove.


    this is one of those peaces that you can't just
    read & walk on by... i enjoyed the read & thank
    you for sharing.

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
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    dis speaks out to touch da living soul
    continue da sharing thoughts