Quiet Poetry Lounge : When I go to that place with you!!!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Jul 30, 2002.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I go to that place with you
    And you are doing that thing that
    you do...My body and soul stretch
    like a new born baby...indeed I
    am born again, each time we unite

    When I go to that place with you
    And you are doing that thing that
    you do...Mind and body stretching
    metamorphising, into this beautiful
    Queen...warmth where you worship
    me, sends life affirming tremors
    from the very core of me....

    And I know you see...
    When I go to that place with you
    and you are doing that thing that
    you do...It's not a burden you see
    cause
    you
    set
    me
    free!
    BJS(c)2002
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free at last free at last !!
    when i go beside u i feel
    the love of one 's spirit
    and when i stand beside u
    i feel the power of joy
    within the name i know
    i'm free.......

    gurl u worked this to da bone !!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving the vibe my sista...this was on fire...
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooohhhh this was HOT!


    let me go to that place with you
    where soul unites with soul
    do that thing you do
    that makes me feel free
    take me to that place
    where life is but utter bliss
    take me to that place
    where all we are is one
    spiritually
    let
    us
    be
    1.

    loved this read!
     
  5. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Set my spirit free at last! This is hot. Nice vibe.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ablaze and straight to the point. Flow on ahead poet.
     
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