Black Poetry : When I Give My Love To You

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I give my love to you,
    close your eyes and receive
    me completely

    Take a deep breath of the
    me that is the air that
    sustains you, gives you
    life to love me in return

    Now imagine…

    Imagine me invading
    your personal space
    as softly as I can

    Imagine me perusing
    your body with my
    fingertips, exploring
    the fineness in you
    with the touch you
    love so much

    with gentle hands and
    an amiable heart…

    Ride the waves and ripples
    of shivers of ecstasy that
    delight even love itself…

    putting a smile on love’s
    face as we journey to
    enchanted bliss

    Then dream…

    Dream of me making
    sweet love to you during
    a snowstorm in the quiet
    of the early morning

    when the feel of me is
    everything
    that you craved all through
    the night

    Dream of our combined
    passion visualizing the
    real which is you and I…

    At the next tender moment,
    share your whispers…

    Whisper those words I
    hear you say with just
    your eyes as I love you
    slowly with my love,
    calling out your name
    with each stroke

    Whisper the spirit of
    your innerself that mates
    with my own in harmony…

    Soon afterward, remember
    us fondly…

    Remember the times we
    share and the times to come
    that only gets better with
    each passing day

    Remember the love I save
    for you is multiplied
    times infinity when I
    give myself unto you…

    Know that I love you,
    I cherish you, and I’m
    yours forever…

    When I give my love to you…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    in complete awe...

    u are doing it GQ



    "whisper those words I
    hear you say with just
    your eyes as i love you
    slowly with my love,
    calling out your name
    with each stroke"



    :hot: :jawdrop:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee-Que.


    well... i'ont know whether to be jealous...
    or to congratulate you... whomeva your muse
    be... she is causing you to work over-time
    my dear!! :lol:

    this is love-ly... you stole my idea for a title!
    (i've been listening to my M.F. cd today. :) )

    :heart:
    BlakGur~
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now my brutha

    ya bringing sweet love flowz
    up in here extreme tyght......
    how can she say no!....flow head on...!:D :toast:
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD - I am trying Queen!!! As long as you keep readin' me, I'll keep ya jaws droppin'!!!!

    BlakGurl - Now you know you don't have a lock on MF since I introduced ya!!! But there are other titles to vibe with fa sho!!! :wink:

    $R - Man, I got to represent for the lover's in the hizzouse bro!!!

    :peace: to all for the read!!!
    GQ
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :hot:

    that's all i can say bro'... five mics? naw...five hearts...

    one.
     
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