Quiet Poetry Lounge : When I First Laid eyes on you ...From the Love is a Roller Coaster series PT.III

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the first time I laid eyes on you I was smitten as they say.
    I couldn't deny the attraction no, how and no way!
    You carried yourself like a King but spoke to everyone on the street.
    You dressed stylishly but not a bit of arrogance showed.
    And when you saw a good looking woman you weren't rude you just walked slow.
    I loved that smile you gave me as we finally bumped into each other.
    Baby, your voice and your ways were so sweet I had to run home and tell my mother.
    Elegant evenings, and casual events all of our free time together we spent.
    You always knew the right thing to say.
    You always kept me on the narrow way.
    Sound in your judgement like Solomon, but with a soon to be revealed weakness like David.
    Before I knew it something was changed, you didn't feel like familiar, you suddenly felt strange.
    I knew your voice but your words were not your own. And then came the whisper's late night on the phone.
    I knew from the first time I laid eyes on you that I was in for trouble, that day!
    But I fell head over heels anyway...

    BJS(C)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we all fall ova hills ......
    dis was off the hook sistah !
    love da flava u bring
     
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    Ahhhhhh...love...**** gurl u make it sound ALL sweet LOL :)
     
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    Girl you know I love me some you!

    Thanks first for reading and second for showing yourself to be a friend. Always know that above all praise is the feeling that lies behind it. The feeling is mutual you know!:D And as always...

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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