Black Poetry : When i die

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  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I die

    I pray when I die
    That won't be where my story ends.
    I pray my demise signifies
    The end of the beginning,
    The start of a new story.
    A much happier one.
    It's a pleasant thought, that infinity waits
    In despite of realities pain-
    That immortality is my fate,
    And one day I will look upon heavens gates.
    That I will kneel before god and present my case
    And he will deem me worthy of his glory. ​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    set forth in life and it will remain forever long after life .
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow thats pretty deep.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To have lived a life worthy of being considered immortal, now that is some vision poet. Thought provoking flow.