Black Poetry : when i couldn't scribe

[thepoetsean]

i was hurtin' then...

one awful day i felt pain in my arm
and it shot up thru my wrists
and n-2
my long lanky fangers

pain, though physical caused
mental effect that would not subside
for this pain made me realize that
i was unable to sc-sc-sc-
s c r i be.

with
still so much to say i
felt as

if
part of me was
taken away
although i might not speak much
I
try
2
revo-loo-shun-(eyes)
into my sight when I* scribe--
and panic
soon cloaked me
like the west earth swallows the sun
12 hours after its rise

thass the closest i've ever felt to death
those days I*
couldn't

s c r i be.


sean.again

 

[story]

wow, ok Sean...i am really feeling this....love it....keep it coming!

 

[shaz]

I can dig this one

 

[UbZoRbShUn]

diggin it

dug it and i put a backhoe on it




One

 

[Reason]

Totally

Loving the comparison of not being able to scribe being close to death!

Tyght Sean!
Reas