Quiet Poetry Lounge : when i be crying sometimes*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Feb 11, 2002.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (off the dome)

    when i be crying sometimes--
    i feel the water weight leaving me--
    cause **** be so painful--

    like this cold world in the winter
    even colder--

    and tears adhere
    to felt fear--
    and loniliness within thy self--
    yet

    if i keep pushing this wall--

    something's gotta give.

    (thatswhatibethinkingwhenibecryingsometimes)

    sean.
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    ahh

    don't cry sean

    :)

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i totally know what ya mean!
    i get like dat sometime....yet quiet
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i thanx yall much 4 da read
     
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    my poetic brother-be here, done this
    but could never state it-So POETICALLY
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u UL820

    glad that you feel my words.

    as do i yours.

    sean.
     
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