Quiet Poetry Lounge : when.....huh?

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when.....huh?

    when
    when we were 2gether
    u wasnt enuf
    when
    when i wanted u
    she controlled all ur thots
    when
    when....
    now
    now that ur free
    form her captivity
    do i want
    wat i did then?
    i need ot decide watsreally gona be good fo me
    if beign wit u
    if gonna keep me happy
    now
    now that ur free
    from that relationship
    wat do i want
    is it U
    now that ur free
    i have genly
    progressed
    grown
    and accepted
    jus our freindship
    as long as our friendship never ends
    when... when will i know wat i want?
    now?
    now that ur free
    if i did want u
    could i
    and if u say yes
    would i
    should i
    wat should i do?
    cuz lets say we reunite our love
    and i get back wit u
    would i be happy
    and if so....
    when...
    if not now....
    when?

    will i be happy if i feel like only I have ur love, even tho i kno it fo me will never end........
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    When huh?

    I like your drop sis!

    When huh?

    Loving it!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u much sista fo ya love
     
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    The uncertainty, the unknowing whether or not an ending is near....I feel you. Keep droppin em.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the questions posed here, are we really in the same place as before? Tight drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome love how u laid this out and the depth of question
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling ya vibe..sweet lay!!!!
    peace
    Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i also like the question..
    the dilemma you are in
    and that end....i went right to tracy c's and started singing..
    thanks for the piece...it is appreciated
     
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    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY NICE PIECE. I ENJOYED READING IT