Quiet Poetry Lounge : When Hearts Are Breaking and souls are shaken!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When hearts are breaking and souls are shaking, it doesn't take much for a tear.
    So you saved yourself for almost a year.
    At least you didn't give it up my dear.
    For lonely nights are made for thinking to rid your life of what's been stinking.
    But it sad when hearts are breaking and souls are shaken. They don't know the damage that they do...Over and over again the come to make complete fools out of me and you. BUT, ahhhhhhhhhhh! who is the joke on when you live your life well, When you bounce back from heartache and no one can tell.
    You know time heals all wounds...
    But baby, trust me you will be betta than eva when you know your worth, it's betta than a warm bed or a comfortable sweater.
    So your hearts been broken well join the club. That doesn't mean that you give up on love. Find satisfaction in your own rewards and before you know it love is knocking at your door.
    Time to savor that intimate flavor, and your heart will be ready in time...Just take your time and think with your mind! Cause sometimes broken hearts end up standing in line.
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    I'll keep this with me forever, I love it. Thanks.
     
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    yes indeed sistah this was a keepsaker for my soul
    truely thank u and i miss u too happy to read u again
     
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    Thanks to a couple of my favorite guys!

    I so appreciate that you felt me on this though from an earlier time it is a part of my Love is a rolller coaster series....Stay tuned!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    :)awwww were yo9u writing this for me:laugh:

    This was very nice. Keep em coming
     
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    Thank you for the message Mz B...:) it meant more to me than you know :) I'm cheesing so hard right now cuz of the message you put into this poem
     
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    U R more profound then u know :)
     
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    Thanks everyone for reading and replying!

    Laugh and the world laughs with you , cry and you cry "with me and the other single folk" hahahahahah! For real I just wanted to drop something from a positive aspects for those with broken hearts and those who are still healing and those who may face it soon enough!
    I wish for you all "Nothing but LOVE!"

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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