Black Poetry : When He Met Her

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When first I saw her I was captivated
    I had to have her digits, her mind,
    her sex, and of course her,
    but not necessarily in that order
    So I pushed up on her and came correct

    "Look I don't mean to invade your space
    And I'm not about spittin' ******** lines
    Your name, number, and you are all I'm about
    You inspire me to want to call you"

    Realizin' a brotha's shootin' straight from the hip
    I believe she believes I pose no threat
    In fact, she thinks I'm kinda cute
    A pretty glance from her confirms my thoughts

    A smooth sashay comin' in my direction
    Leavin' nothin' to my innocent imagination
    I explore her tight body skillfully
    Lovin' the way of this woman's confidence

    The words flowed from her lips eloquently
    "What's your name Mister Man?" says she
    A little timid by her beauty and style
    I replied in my own confident habit

    "My name is anything you want it to be!!"

    She found that charming and couldn't help
    herself but to laugh - I knew I had her then
    We were feelin' one another at that very
    instance - she took out a business card and said

    "You can call me Boo!"

    We exchanged gentle pleasantries all evening
    It was as if we'd known each other for a lifetime
    The time was drawing near to depart this mix
    I reciprocated the business card gesture and said

    "My info is there ~ use it as you wish!"

    I planted a soft kiss on her lips, turned to
    get my gear, and meant to say a parting
    word or two…but she was gone…

    The night grew long and anxious for me
    I scurried home with blissful thoughts of her
    I knew the call would not surrender to days
    I was callin' this honey soon as hand met phone

    Loaded with verbal rapability, I punched 7 keys
    Keys that would eventually lead me to ecstasy
    Ready to spew lovely somethings if the mood proved right
    Anxious to do it to her in her ear hole

    Riiiing!!! With baited breath I wait
    Lyrically visualizin' her angelic voice Riiiing!!!
    Riiiing!!! Should I hang up?
    No, a few more seconds so as not to be rude Riiiing!!!
    I hung up...

    Then the doorbell shouted at me with a loud "Buzzzz"!!!!

    Hung up on me hangin' up on her unanswered line
    I strolled to the door with a feeling of dejection
    I needed to hear her voice just one last time tonight
    Realizin' not that I opened the door without a thought

    There she stood - whispering softly

    "I used your info as you told me ~ I hope you don't mind"

    I turned away for a second, closed my eyes and exhaled in delight!!!
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well told story blak man! Right there at the door..Well what happened next? you know you got's to follow tha up with a sequel. "10"

    blak
     
  3. honeyluv

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    I KNEW U WOULD COME HOME

    SO WAS IT ME OR SHE TO BE HELD BY U...
     
  4. Destee

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    yeaaahhh ... i like the way this read too
    very nice GQ !

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm... fact or fiction...

    gq...
    we have discussed this
    piece before... & you
    know i love it... as i
    love everything you do!
    i would like for you
    to read this one for
    me... one day... kay?

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awaiting chapter two my friend...

    excellent

    dnommo
     
  7. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you the man

    love your story line here dawg
    you ain't got nothing to be ashamed of
    truly a true poet in my eyes
     
  8. N2urSoul

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    GQ~

    Where have you been all my life???

    I like this piece - it really works well!

    luvin' it!!
     
  9. Bishop

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    MAN you can't stop there!!!!
     
  10. nubianlover

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    GQ

    more more more!!
    man too wooooh!