Black Poetry : When He Met Her {Part II}

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My exhale of delight turned into a shortness of breath
    I kept my eyes closed to fight back the bulging of
    my eyes and the even bigger bulge in my Boss silkies

    A quick minute ago, I was hella upset but now…
    My imminent reality could surely be her unknown fantasy

    "Well Mister Man??!!?? You gonna let me in or what???"

    Comin' back down where reality checks are a dime a dozen
    I gestured her to come on it and followed her every switch
    Musing to myself, I thought

    "****, this honey is finer than fine!"

    "Have a seat; make yourself at home sweetness, I'll be right back"

    I was chillin' as usual; not expecting a late night visitor
    but my place was tight and my libidinous instinct was tighter

    Walking into the bedroom, I took a quick glance to make sure
    everything was straight; it was, so I hurried back to my pleasure
    personified in the form of luscious lips, hips, and…you get the point

    I came across "Dominique" checking out my jazz CD collection
    She said she was a FourPlay fan as well and asked me to play
    something…how did she say…

    "Sexy and smooth"

    Turning my head slightly to the right in her opposite direction
    Vibin' with my alter ego GQ {who's very LIVE}, I softly said

    "I think it's gonna be on like that tonight!!"

    If it's FourPlay she wants, hell it's FourPlay she'll get
    Jazz CD and of course, my physical "foreplay" most def!

    Minding my manners, I asked "Dom" if she cared for something

    "A little white wine would be nice; but only if you have any"

    Now mind you, I'm a Henessy man by nature but I keep chilled
    bottles of vino on tap for spontaneous situations such as this

    So I get the wine and poured me a shot (well two) of Henny on ice
    When I'm in chill mode like this, I vibe really well with incense
    Drink and a nice jazzy instrumental for our mentals don't hurt either
    Love Supreme incense lit and saturating the air with a fragrance that
    cries out

    "If ya can't get romantic from my aromatic blaze, then sumthin's
    wrong wit cha!!"

    Flaunting inside soul smiles as I sit across from this hour glass
    sculpted body of perfection; wishing; nah; praying for our
    bodies to embrace in a model of mutual lusty thoughts

    Yes I want this honey; but she has to want me too I deduce
    So why not enhance the moment to hasten her passion

    The way she looked at me told me it was time to let it all flow
    I moved with manly grace next to her on the sofa and breathed
    a quick sigh of relief when she said

    "I was wondering when you were gonna stop acting shy"

    "I think you know why I'm here"

    Now presumptuous I'm not; so I had to ask of her

    "Why?"

    "When I saw you, I liked you; I felt a urgent need to make
    love to you tonight" says she

    Sweating, steamy, horny, and all that, I moved in for her love
    with the swiftness of a strong black panther

    Kisses on her earlobes and caresses of her womanly figure
    proved just the right sensations to set it all off when she asked

    "Shall we move to the bedroom or do you want me right here?"
     
  2. Desert Storm

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    OH!

    Oh! This is Nize. Very sentimental and I be feelin dis one fa sho. And I be chillin like this fa sho. Thinkin bout your love fo sho. Thinkin bout how your love makes me weak. But my name be not "SHY" or "SECRECY" ... Crystal, nize to meet ya, Cuz I'm tight like dat...sweet surrender...Is what you'll be intoxicated lovin you slow and continous repeat....

    Desert STorm
     
  3. blakverb

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    Pt Two is dope...but what's up wit' the three?

    See bro like a good novelist who knows he has a sequel in him you dangle that last line out there like a carrot waiting for someone to say "well ****...what did you do bro?". So I'm saying GQ you know this piece is tight with a smooth transistion from the first,but, where did ya go? to the bedroom or did ya stay right there. If ya didn't have a Part three I'm challenging you (knowing a man likes a good challenge) scribe a part three bro, I know you got it in ya. Ya storytelling is on point so drop the third "funky joint".

    one love, blak
    yo poetical brother
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ... GQ... GQ... (lol)

    i cannot help but laugh!! :lol:

    you are such a talented mutha-...
    well you know da rest!! i was hanging
    on your every word... you really
    should write a novel... REALLY!!!
    (how many times i gotta tell ya?!) :wink:

    L&R...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Part III's the fiery epilogue - it's in ma head...it will soon follow most def!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    GQ YA ROMANCING IN A ROMANTIC FIRE
    DES BE A WOOOOOWEEEE!! MAN U SHOULD
    DROP THIS PIECE LIKE I READ IT
    A NOVAL FO SHO!
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where in the flying hell is part 1 GQ ?
    Let me flip throught these 15 pages to find this here. I'll be back.




    *needs a glass of h2o*
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here comes the epilogue!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Yeah.... What GA_Sun said!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I'd like a signed copy pweeeze.
     
  10. redlady

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    See, I'm new to this page...so I gotta run and find part 1 somewhere...I felt like i was watchin' a movie. I was like, why this "little".....but that works too! I liked this. Redlady