Black Poetry : When He Feels For Her

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a man feels for her, he's not afraid to let it show...
    He'll climb upon mountains and shout it for the world to know.
    He'll be rain, showering her with immeasurable affections
    She'll be like air, breathing her in would be his addiction
    Yet he would still be balanced always maintaining his center
    Revealing the true nature of his heart, only to and for her
    He'll be madman, vulnerable, though obscured from all else to see.
    Making declarations of what he feels like penitent man on bended knees
    Inwardly he feels an abyss overwhelming to his form
    He'll remain calm like the center of a storm
    Though he feels deeper than the depths of space
    If nothing she feels for him gone he'll be without a trace

    Nahshon-Rae
     
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    Superb, sensational, dynamite!!!

    Now, if only men could actually voice and show these emotions in this day and time. The ones that I've met and talked to seemed to want the woman to make all the first moves (nothings wrong w/that)....but, when he never initiate anything, there's something wrong. Like he's the Man and must be catered to. Show me you care, you're not showing me anything. Well, the men of today need to up their game. I don't think the women today is gonna put up with their ****.

    Just saying.....Women are equals today, not man's servant.
    Why are you speechless?
     
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    Butterfly#1 your comments have left me speechless... thank you...
     
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    No, thank you! I had to respond, because your poem describe my deceased husband to a 'T'. Its almost like you knew us and our lives together. He was a wonderful man, just as you describe in your poem. Tell me Nahshon, are there men half that..on earth today?
     
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    Now that's deep.

    Very beautiful and lovely work here. :)
     
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    Thank you Angela22...I appreciate your comments and sentiments... thank you again...
     
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    Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem.:luv:
     
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    Angela, he's simply awesome, huh!
     
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    Totally. :D

    The words to this poem ring so true, with such emotion; I love it.:hearts1:
     
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    Amen sister!
     
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