Black Poetry : When he feels for her...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nahshon, Dec 1, 2004.

  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a man feels for her, he's not afraid to let it show...
    He'll climb upon mountains and shout it for the world to know.
    He'll be rain, showering her with immeasurable affections
    She'll be like air, breathing her in would be his addiction
    Yet he would still be balanced always maintaining his center
    Revealing the true nature of his heart, only to and for her
    He'll be madman, vulnerable, though obscured from all else to see.
    Making declarations of what he feels like penitent man on bended knees
    Inwardly he feels an abyss overwhelming to his form
    He'll remain calm like the center of a storm
    and though he feels deeper than the depths of space
    If nothing she feels for him, gone he'll be without a trace

    Nahshon-Rae 12/1/2004
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the truth flows, it shines. This was on point brotha, flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed a man of love who express
    will always comfort and caress and
    confess his love aloud ......well said
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOhhh I liked this one!!

    "He'll be rain, showering her with immeasurable affections
    She'll be like air, breathing her in would be his addiction
    Yet he would still be balanced always maintaining his center
    Revealing the true nature of his heart, only to and for her"

    I can't wait til my King comes along and love me like this! Flow on brotha!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhh...yes, yes, yes

    If I could stand beneath the drops of this beautiful rain
    and dance forever...I would

    You captured the true essence of a man who loves
    and loves hard...effortlessly

    It seemed as though...these words fell from you
    as light as a feather because you "know" the
    experiential element that stirs beneath them...

    *Encore...Poet...Encore*

    The Sage...bows before these words, indeed...
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " Making declarations of what he feels like penitent man on bended knees "

    Nahshon

    You pinned this flow. I really like the above line. Pouring out to the lady how he feels. Letting it be known he wants her in his life. Well posed poet. Well Posed.
     
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