Black Poetry : WHEN HE AND SHE

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  1. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When he and she
    I wonder what would happen if he loved and she loved at the same time??

    Can’t you just see smiles from ear to ear?

    I can just imagine sweet heart-warming whispers …

    Inside jokes funny only to the two of you.

    Lots of touching, smooching

    Giggles just from seeing each other…

    butterflies just from the mention of the other's name

    Tones of yes baby whatever u want

    I can just feel the passion

    Can you see homes filled with peace?

    I see love babies being born

    How I long to personalize that experience

    Lives would be complete

    Happiness would fill the air

    Intimacy on a whole new level

    Expressing, sharing and caring beyond measures…

    No matter what comes up all would be ok

    United they will concur the world

    That’s what happens when he and she love at the same time.

    Signed:ME​
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i can see the beauty of two sharing , manifesting deep
    when two love at the same time i vision it all nice window to peep in
    tyte write
     
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    tight flow..I enjoyed this piece.
     
  4. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich and Brotha Bishop.... you guys know how to make a woman smile... wink..Ms J
     
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    Nice flowing enjoyed the read.....