Black Poetry : ~When Cionna Cries: Part 2~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo i lost part 1

    -shrugs



    lord
    i would like
    to hear
    your voice
    just one
    just
    one
    time...

    maybe
    that
    one
    that one
    time will
    change
    my life...

    i'm living a life
    i don't
    want...
    i'm sorry
    i
    just
    don't
    give
    a ****...
    please
    lord
    just
    once...
    a whisper
    soft like
    the
    wind's
    soothing touch...?

    something
    anything
    a simple
    scream...
    a
    scream
    like
    a
    mother
    witnessing
    te death of
    her baby..

    lord i ask
    of
    you...
    tell
    me what
    are these
    tears
    here to do...
    besides
    make my eyes
    red...
    "he is there"
    i believe
    is
    what kim (kp)
    said...
    well kim
    i
    guess
    i'll
    die
    a painful
    burden...
    oh
    lord
    please
    touch
    my streching
    hand...
    the clock
    is ticking
    And i will find use with this
    gun
    to my
    head...
    yes
    i'm suicidal
    at times...
    but i
    know
    that's
    not
    the answer
    when i hear my daughter's
    cries...
    how
    cionna
    has my mother's
    eyes...

    lord
    give
    me
    strength
    if you
    cant
    give
    me
    your voice...
    my
    daughter
    my life
    i shall rejoice...

    one luv
     
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    Mind~$oul thou ear hear forth da touch is given
    in a comfort of another soul , one may hear he speaketh
    in whispers of another soul when he come to answer
    be of faith and ready forth he will cometh unto thee.

    Beautiful soulful quest .......loved it
    cry no more tears :)
     
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    yes
    i'm suicidal
    at times...
    but i
    know
    that's
    not
    the answer
    when i hear my daughter's
    cries...
    how
    cionna
    has my mother's
    eyes...

    dope dope dope

    man i love your writtin......we should do another collabo.....

    everytime i read your stuff i just wanna go write something

    holla at me
    expect alot of replies to this one cat, one of my favorite things i seen u drop in a minute
     
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    very powerfull

    keep it up
     
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