Black Poetry : When a Woman Wants

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a woman wants
    A man to change something
    Do something,
    Stop doing something
    Or give her something

    She doesn't go into fair talks and negotiations.
    Communicate the desire
    In a fair manner
    It is all of a sudden a jump in the dark :court::court:

    Totally leaving her man disarmed,
    Lost sword and shield homeless in a park
    Wondering what just happened.

    Why the bedroom isolation? :whip:

    The sex cut off and negotiations

    “ Love don’t cost a thing “ but cooperation.
    Her Way!

    I have never heard of a man doing
    This kind of cut off
    Sort of screwing

    Playing games
    With a portion of self

    Saying I am cutting off giving
    You my Member
    Ship wondering

    I am holding out until
    You give me your worth

    It feels like a castration :sick:
    Of something good
    In a good long term
    Could have been good relation

    That a man has entered
    Now he feels betrayed

    For she told him something
    Like… I will love
    You always honey :SuN030:

    And he gave into a moment
    That seems so right and so real

    He spent time examining
    Weighed the reactions
    Of his lover

    It looked so good
    He gave a Ring
    To someone
    He thought he
    Could Trust

    Young Men
    They get to hear stories

    Of Old Men
    And their days of Glory

    Telling about days
    Of recall reminisce

    When he was
    Young and Handsome

    Of how he
    Loved and he lost

    How he loved
    And paid the cost

    To a Woman
    Who held the Love Ransom? :SuN042:

    Then they Wonder :10500:
    why a Man :fyi:
    Runs the street trying to stick something.​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here's something else to wonder about:
    "While playing Rushen Roulette, or (sticking) as you call it. Let's hope that while ya out there sticking someone....that, you don't get stuck, with something a "stick" can't cure.!! ...just a thought for today/life :D
    loved the piece poet!
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this one...

    TOO MANY women want to hold the love for ransom...forcing men to cancel tonight...fight for a moment of "love me"...that should be free. BUT when he gets HIS from SOMEONE ELSE, she wants to get mad...terminate forever.

    DOESN'T HAVE TO BE THAT WAY.

    the river floweth.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek:

    Wow brother HODEE...and insight to the dirty huh?


    I hope they make it!

    Flow on Bro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaa bruh this was it right here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like some mutual communication is in order, and possible changes made on both sides. That way, she won't feel like sleeping with anger, and he won't feel like letting his other head lead him astray. Wow.
     
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    MADDRAPPER II Banned MEMBER

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    WHAT A WOMAN WANT IS LOVE AND PRAYER LIKE BLESS YOU A CHOO
    GOT REAL STYLE AND NATURAL LIKE ERYKAH BA-DU
    NO ITS ME YOU LIKE HEY MADD YOU GROWING SEE
    INTO A MAN NO PLAN BUT HOT WITH POETRY
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW LOL

    While I dont deny that many sistas play the "hold it hostage" situation...

    I personally dont believe in it lol

    tough times brotha hodee tough times lol

    stay strong :read:
     
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