Black Poetry : WHEN A WOMAN CALLS MY NAME!!

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a woman calls MY name.... it was earned and inspired by

    the the REAL thunder  of my sweet caresses and the lightning

    striking between  her INHALE and her EXHALE as the massaging

    of her "MENTAL CERVIX " is begun ....SLOW and DELIBERATE...

    this

    in itself is truth spawned from DEEP DEVINE DEBATED

    beginnings within the full nature of her conceptual

    yearnings...she needs to be

    TRUE to herself FIRST... and when she is REAL......

    relevant revelations from calling my name only CONFIRMS,

    QUALIFIES and CONNECTS sweet watermelon wishes that

    become inwardly serious and tantalizingly delicious, YES she

    WILL call my name .... rendered IRRELEVANT .... I don't think

    you have ever "called" my name...but the connection was

    hungry and the NEED would not be denied.... it WAS fed and

    awakened knowing no rest and left wandering and wanting

    MORE... Slurred energy was transformed and  tenderized, taunt

    and  tight.... slowly pulsating as time and distance becomes

    driven wishful wisps of needful nothings, as  the meaning of

    thoughts that are whip creme tripped and chocolate dipped

    fantasticly take over, sending you back to a place you can NEVER



    leave..... TIMELESS.

    My poetic head is bowed, plowed, and seeded.........muscles

    aching with lucid loose emotions cascading as life giving filtrated

    exellence that never gets tired....INJECTED, INGESTED,

    INSPIRED.

    Mohogany moist and sweet.

    SAY IT NOW.

    SAY IT SLOW.

    SAY IT OUT LOUD.

    SAY IT WITHOUT WORDS.

    JUST SAY IT.


    Did I do that?
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!
    break it on down !
    tyte scribe
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this was tight
    breakin it down...
    dig that...lol
     
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    Yes you said it. Great post.
     
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    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SAY IT WITHOUT WORDS.

    JUST SAY IT.



    ...That was pure hotness. I like that alot. umph....Im coming back later to read this again
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ow ow ow lol
    just :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    ummmm...can u plese install some sprinklers for ya self seeing as how the page is on fire lol :)
    Quin...I can not begin to tell you how talented you are so i will suffice in simply existing in your aura :)
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    boy...that was just ridiculously hot! man...that's all i can say
     
  8. Khasm13

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    dude...
    if she doen't say it afta dat
    she must be a mute....lol
    tyte son
    peace
    khasm
     
  9. angelicsage

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    My Mahogany…

    Crippled into softened inhales as you became my only……breath
    Escaping…as
    You provoked….exhales of oratory pleasures in the night
    Indicative of the simultaneous flux of debated beginnings
    Between us….confirming the connection, we already knew
    Would be timeless….

    And while I may have never called your name….(per say)
    My needs were not denied as I spewed of intermittent verbalizations
    Echoed over heaven……….to the divine
    In thanks of the rains….awakened and sent to tantalize
    And replenish….as I called out for you…

    Quinessential Now

    Quinessential Slow

    Quinessential Loud

    (((and Quinessential without words)))

    I say it ….uninhibited


    Did I just say that….






    (A poet like you..........needs no introduction, Encore, Encore, Encore........This was Hot!)
     
  10. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich-

    Deeply felt thanks for all you do dawg!!(tuck your cape in,ok?) lol

    Mzblkangel, Kori, Hodee-

    I try and write my true inner emotions...birthing each post as I feel it. Thank you.


    Tiiniti424-

    Let me put some Neo-Sporin on that for you boo!! lol
    Hey thanks for being so supportive and positive.

    I don't post as much as some folks, but my work is often overlooked, I don't know why.(maybe I'm not understood very well?)

    I LOVE WRITING and with comments like yours...I'll never stop.


    True Love-

    Being felt is always a good feeling!!

    Thank you for reading my post.


    Khasm-

    My brother poet.....I honestly enjoy hearing from you on my postings. I feel you have a grasp on what I write and feel it in the spirit it was written in.

    Blessings on ya house!!



    SAGE-

    I don't know any foreign languages to be fluent enough to spin a web to encapsulate the things you inspire in my life.

    All I can say is continue to exsist as you do......in my heart.

    Thank you for letting me "call" your name first.
     
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