Black Poetry : WHAT'S YOUR FANTASY?

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    WHAT'S YOUR FANTASY?

    This title
    Just a jedi mind trick
    A way to start
    To get into your head

    Tis ashame
    that most think
    Fantasies are
    only made in bed

    In my fantasy
    There is

    No house
    No bed
    No room

    My fantasies my pre-conception
    And it all starts in the womb

    The womb of my
    Universal mother
    Together with
    Passion from her lover

    All loving thoughts
    For me
    And those same loving thoughts
    Shaped reality

    All shapes for heaven's sake
    circles, squares and all the rest

    Weaved a cloth of infinity
    To surpass any kind of test

    Mom said
    Take this love
    Dad said
    I got your back

    Now go out into the world
    But I said
    No mom no dad
    I'm just a little girl

    And mommy said
    That's right my sweet
    And what better then a child
    To remember the love of GOD
    That will last you all the miles

    Then daddy wiped my tears
    And said he couldn't take it
    When I cry
    He said stand upright and love yourself
    I'll never let you die

    My mortal parents had a fantasy
    And made me out of lust
    But my heavenly parents made me out of love
    And they are who I trust

    Mother
    Father
    Child

    And the unity
    Of love
    My parents will never get divorced
    They conceived of all below and above

    WITH LOTUS HANDS I HONOR MY PARENTS!

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    this was a beautiful prose poet....
    keep flowin....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    :bowdown:

    :terrific:
     
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    tis ashame.... i borrowed ur words..

    lol

    to u i bow my brother

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    mere reflection from the reflector!

    nine count means u complete me
     
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    A fantasy of pure, unconditional love. What a beautiful scribe poetess.
     
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    Da fantasy of beauty from within da womb to da outter lair.....awesome scribing poetess
     
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    What an ethereal write sister
    you took a title grew a flow and educated with every step
    much props poetess
     
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    I can dig it
     
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    This was heavy!

    And your contrasting the earth parents/heavenly parents was powerful!
     
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