Black Poetry : what's this...?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Jan 30, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have you ever be
    torn
    between
    reality and destiny?
    you want the world
    as you see it
    yet...
    destiny shows you
    beyond what your
    eyes can see into
    your true future,
    reality...

    destiny allows you to
    you see light beyond
    the darkness you have
    blanketed yourself in
    you see flowers is a field
    you've left barren and dry
    a crystal clear river flows
    in a dirt trench you dug...

    "what is this...?"
    you question your existence
    your position...
    your being...
    your heart and soul connection
    with...( ? )
    "it's not possible!"
    you say...but destiny
    has the final say


    reality is realizing destiny

    MsDLite (c) 01.01
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    destiny

    the REAL of your REALITY. hmmm. i'm feelin' dis.
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ... and then it's always changing

    Beautiful MsDLite
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man

    This was not only Deep, but beautiful as well...
    Nicely done sis..... :shades:
     
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