Black Poetry : WHAT'S THE USE (RESPONSE TO DSS)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Jan 16, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    you are sexy.. you rock the boat
    you are sexy.. the boat is afloat

    once it was sinking..
    but u got me thinking...

    I felt sexy... since the first day
    you even took the time to look my way...

    and what's the use of sticking around...
    and only staying if the chips ain't down...

    as we define the individuality in the oxy moron us...

    what's the use...

    if u can't trust?

    ebonically speaking can i hold u down...
    nah, I really don't like how that sound...

    so in my lingo.. can i hold u up...
    cause u r sexy..

    and i can't get enough...

    you talking in a dialect.. that is not foreign...

    thank you DSS... for getting to know Lauren...... (that's me) :)


     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hold it down

    in this case

    is about holding down the sector

    trust?

    comes with time

    and action and reaction
     
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    Hey Sis
    Wonderful piece.
    It so nice how
    how the poems are just flowing
    Made me write a piece about it

    Keep bringing it.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Miss Lady...as usual you are doin' it and doin' it and doin't it WELL!!!! This was great!
     
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    What's the use? Good question Miss Lady. Keep those thought provoking flows coming.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poppin fire wit desire
    ready to become much higher
    this joint was like wire to wire
     
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    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really like the rhythm

    yeah, this has a nice timing and it leaves one satisfied like a cool drink of water
     
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    The HOLLA was BOSS

    The RESPONSE ((THE MOST))
     
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    i'm feeling ya heart here.
    beautiful.
    Desert Storm
     
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