Quiet Poetry Lounge : What's real?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 17, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No cause 4 alarm on this destee dot com
    see this site is the bomb
    with it's knowledge like a farm,
    I love every single member from the hyperactive to the calm
    so I say Hotep to my family from ya brother Python,
    Turn ya lights on
    step up in chat and click ya mics on
    Black brothers and sisters
    Rhyme spitters and listerners
    Poets , teachers , family members and every spirit lifters
    this is ya night so im sending true sight
    take flight sit tight and learn from hindsight
    Fly ya minds high as kites
    or better yet like the stars at night
    well im about to get started to get started...are u ready? Aright!

    what's real?
    is real living in the streets with nothing to eat searching for heat allowing every single problem to bring u 2 defeat?
    Or is real packing more Nines than than the 5th grade Just 2 sell dope so money is made?
    What's real?
    Is real being a single mother because a brother cant muster the strength to discover his seeds have a needs so get it together Mother F****r?
    Or is real having to feel like u aint S**T 4 real because the mother has no ideal that a father needs his kids surealnow thats Ill.
    What's real?
    Is real going on a date with a friend who's great just to wind up raped because that friend was fake now u feeling self hate from ya body 2 ya mental state?
    Or is real fake teachers flase preechers who serve themselves and not what God teach us hell the 1st man was Black and so was jesus!
    What's real?
    Real men step the F up
    What's real?
    Only fake people are stuck up
    What's real?
    Black women were ment to be treated like Queens
    What's real?
    Real Queens know how to treat Kings
    What's real?
    Kids need quality time and a family who's there
    What's real?
    2 many of us have kids and don't act like we care!
    What's real?
    2 many of our youth are ready 2 die
    What's real?
    they feel they have no future and that's the reason why!
    What's real?
    Love'n somone with all your heart
    What's real?
    Feeling love hurt when it all falls apart
    What's real?
    feeling all alone and empty
    What's real?
    Feeling like you were the reason why god sent me
    What's real?
    Knowing you are going to die but u keep on moving without blinking an eye!
    What's real?
    Waking up every day knowing everything i said is true but u still aint changed ya way!

    mad love 2 you family and 2 your family
    Python!
     
  2. mahoganyqueen

    mahoganyqueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow was too nice. Everyone thinks being real is living in pain, but it's really about what you overcome.
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you my sister and yes u are so right about that. :number1:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    there's nothing more real then this as one say
    there's no place like home !
    this was so phat and real i just want to sit here and cascade deeper
    into it for a while if u don't mine !
    much love @ ya Python
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the way you brought this brotha. Real is what we live, be it good, bad, or indifferent. Your flow takes us to so many different spaces and places. Flow on, this was tight.
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: alright now LIKE WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT :hearthis:
    look whos back in town lol
    or is this just a part of ya "cameo" baltimore skripper extravagant lol
    I dont doubt your "heatbringer" skillz brotha but when you lay it down like THIS
    maaaaaaaaaaaan make a sista wanna testify at that one trial bout that one time...at band camp :huh: hehehe *giggles*

    lol but seriously this was indeed a joy to read :read: :)
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thank you brother c....
    for giving love to the familee
    for snaking through so many spots
    the flow was nice as well as hot
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh see no you didnt
    oh yes you did....
    see i knew ya had it...
    now keep on doing it
    this was real and tight my brother
    welcome back home
    nothing but love for you

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Bless your heart, cp, this is a thing of beauty.
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My family I thank you all!

    $$RICH$$ ............My brother with words like these I am thankful and humbled. Thankyou!

    watzinaname ........I try to give different vies within my works my sister and it pleases me when I see it is recieved. Thank You!

    triniti424 ............LMAO...We all nedd our slice of the "American Pie". Well since i am oue of your bigger fans my sister it's a pleasure to get this love back as u always do. :kiss1:

    deepy ...............Deep this family is amazing and I just wanted u all 2 know this. So I now thank you for your gifts u have blessed us with also.

    mzblkangel .........CDFU..."Oh Yes I Did" Just 4 u all and because I could.....LOL. You give alot to me in this family and I am always thankful 4 it. Even if I do have 2 duck a :skillet: or two.

    gempis .............My heart was blessed the first time I placed myself into this familys house! Thanks alot my sis. :D

    Rember family there is no greater love than the love we share with eachother.
     
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